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Why Sensei Always Speaks in Haiku

One time, back in November 2005, when Club Penguin was just getting started, there was a mean emporer, the ruler of all penguins (pun intended). He was so mean, he didn't want people to speak at all. so mostly, penguins kept thier chat bubble somewhere in thier blubber (ew).

One day, when Sensei was young and didn't have a beard or wierd hat, he stumbeled out of his igloo. He was young, and he didn't know about the no talking rule because his mother had died in one of Gary's early invention testing and his father had bought that same exact product that killed his mother, and he died too.

So Sensei saw his neighbor, Pengo, getting his mail and called out " HI PENGO! I SEE THAT YOU ARE GETTING YOU'RE MAIL. IS THERE ANYTHING GOOD IN THERE! ANY MAGAZINES?"

Pengo put a flipper to his beak to tell Young Sensei to shut up.

But Sensei kept yelling "ANY TRIAL OFFERS OF SHAMPOO?" For some reason, young Sensei was addicted to shampoo samples.

Just then, while Sensei was yelling, the Emporer came down the street with his security guards, Shut, Up, Be, and Quiet.

the Emporer and his guards approached young Sensei. With a word, Shut tied up Senseis flippers.

" Hey! What are you doing? Do you any shampoo samples? Hello?"

" Shush, young one. Be quiet. Do you like ninjas?" asked the emporer.

" Ninjas are awesome. Way cool. Why?"

"Ninjas are also quiet. Since you cannot be quiet, you will the master of ninjas, whom are always quiet." pronounced the emporer.

"But can't I talk to my ninjas?" asked Sensei.

" you mmay only say 17 sylables at a time. That is called a haiku. It is the way of the ninja. Go. Build a dojo. Train ninjas, but only when you are ready." said the emporer.

The end.

I love it, especially as I am a full ninja

Same here, and I caught up to Solnces post count!

OH NO YOU DIDN"T

you guys are going off topic STOP IT and return to the same topic of this wonderful story

O its on!

8/10
i think you shoud work harder to go to 10

This is sorta a story too.

Interesting... and funny!

no im like 30 posts ahead of solnce... mwa ha ha ha ha!!!

love it

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10/10

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can we lock this topic

yeah we should if we can jesse might now be abable to lock it

yea lock it

Cant lock it

the story is good :

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