Back In Time part 2

I started this story in April, and I've had many (okay, 3) requests to make part two.

If you haven't already read part 1, I recommend you go and read it now; otherwise this story will make no sense.


"Where are we?, I asked.

"I dunno," Brenna said.

"What are you kids doing here?" a hobo came up to us. He had a Southern Accent.

"Um, standing?" I answered.

"You aint funny," the hobo stormed off.

"What is this place?" Brenna asked.

"It looks like a cornfield," I answered.

"Woah. What are you kids, like, doing here?" asked a guy with freakishly long hair in about his mid 20s.

"A HIPPIE!!!" I yelled, running around. those dudes scared me almost more than Michael Jackson. I was officially freaked out. I reached into my pocket for my cell phone. there was nothing.

"Brenna!" I came running back into where the hippie was, "I lost my cell phone!"

"Cell phone?" asked the hippie, "What's that?"

"Have you been living in 1960 this past year?" I asked.

"It's 1962," answered the hippie simple. He then walked away.

"Linda," Brenna said, "Alex Vanbury. His time machine worked! We're in 1962!"

"But where are we?" I asked.

" Linda. I think we're in school. It just wasn't built yet!" Brenna screamed.

"How do we get back?" I demanded.

"We need to get the time machine back," Brenna concluded.

"But how? It's not invented yet!" I screamed.

Tell me how you think this story should end!

idk how it should end

Make some kind of surprizes in it, like a time paradox or something.

me wnts 2 go bck in tme

hello my shmexy

I love this story!

& i think it should end with the hobo making another time machine.(yes the hobo is smart and knows how to make one)