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 The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds

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PostSubject: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime21/05/09, 07:58 pm

Okay Readers, We last left off with Dq and Minybuddie thinking of how to get into Rockhopper's ship!

Chapter 4. Extream stunts

Well Reader, Dq and Minybuddie knew that it would be very difficult to get on this ship and that's when it hit Minybuddie he ran over to Dq and explained, but as it turned out Dq was thinking the same thing,

"We can use the jet packs and Fly Down onto the ship then when we are done We can just fly back away!" Miinybuddie told dq!

"Yea that way we can go in and out and no one will ever know we were here!" Dq replied

So reader what do you think? Was it wise to go to all that trouble to see a ship? well only the story will tell,

Dq and minybuddie raced up the steps ready to do whatever it takes to get on that ship! They got up to the top straped there jetpacks on and jumped! They fly down slowly and gently at first they they started to here a sputtering noise.

"O No the jetpacks dont have enough Fuel!" Dq Screamed

"we are ganna Crash!" Minybuddie yelled back

And Thats when it happened the sputtering noise stoped and they just started to fall Faster and faster as they dropped. They droped right into the barrels of cream soda, But if the barrels were not there they surely would have been hurt.

"We made it!" Dq replied in a painfull grone

"Yea but now we cant leave" Minybuddie replied

"we can sneak out when rockhopper comes to get back on!" Dq explained

So Reader They Went And Explored the ship and they explored and explored and lost track of time so much they did not here when someone came on the ship untill they heard,

"Arg Who Crushed All Me Cream Soda!"

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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime21/05/09, 09:37 pm

aweosme 10/10 cant do better
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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime22/05/09, 01:14 am

Little spelling errors
Knew NOT new
Oh NOT O
Going to crash NOT Gonna crash

5/5 - 1 (Of spelling errors) = 4/5
You can do better! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime22/05/09, 07:47 pm

I say... 5/5

By the way, I'll correct the spelling errors.

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Good job.
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PostSubject: Thanks Guys   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime22/05/09, 07:55 pm

Thanks You Very Much Everyone! And thanks for being corrective without being rude thats very nice of you
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thanks, Im THE GRAMMARFIXER!
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very good story, I could almost make this an official story.
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wow 10/10 good story
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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime02/06/09, 03:08 pm

Coolio!The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds Happy0045
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PostSubject: Re: The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds   The Story Of Penguin Island (part 2) By Hero Ds I_icon_minitime06/06/09, 03:41 pm

LOL Thanks For the Great Feed Back And That Would Be Great Dq But First I have to Finish The Story! Very Happy:
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